Difference between revisions of "Alan/Contacts"

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Star	Far too young for the burden of responsibility that she's been given.
Balthazar	Young, impetuous, stubborn, and very, very powerful. It's a combination that could end in disaster.
Zahru	Sometimes petulant and often pushy, but I know that she's genuinely concerned for me, and I appreciate that.
Ophelia	I'm sorry things turned out the way that they did, but I understand why you left.
Rocky	He saw me when no one else did. He was there for me in my worst years. He raised me. For this, I will always be grateful.
Schulyer	When I took her in, back in New York, she was a child who could have been eaten by the predators in that city. She grew up there, and it changed her, like it changed me. Neither of us fits in at home anymore.
Danny	He has a brilliant mind, and so much potential. It's a shame to see him squandering it on keeping servers active and fixing computers. I don't know what he came here to hide from, but I hope he faces it someday.
Winnie	I can't help but think of Pygmalion.
Lucas	I'm not sure if he realizes that I can see that he's trying to flatter me. Still, it's good to have a doctor on the grounds.

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-|When I took her in, back in New York, she was a child who could easily have been eaten by the predators in that city.  She grew up there, and it changed her, like it changed me.  Neither of us quite fits in at home anymore.
+|When I took her in, back in New York, she was a child who could have been eaten by the predators in that city.  She grew up there, and it changed her, like it changed me.  Neither of us fits in at home anymore.
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